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Written by Rey   
Friday, 08 July 2005

This is part of a fun Blog Party that Lorna is holding over at her site. The project is to use these specific 15 words and put them into a story format. Try your hand at it and check the others out over yonder. Here's my submission.

incessantly, vibration, apple, reaching, professional, immaculate, seawater, blush, wondering, manufacture, quivery, desperate, straw, separated, tendrils

I find myself wondering where I am. I’ve been sitting in this place listening to an odd vibration incessantly pulsating through the lower levels of my prison. The empty husk of an apple lies nearby, perhaps on the straw (or so I think it to be) that I call my seat. I have long left the desperate plans of escape behind and have entered into the immaculate freedom found only in my mind. There, face a blush with laughter, I find myself reaching beyond this present darkness and standing at the edge of the seawater separated forever from this bleak present. I traipse along those sandy shores staring at the manufacture of my mind—glistening white and yellows on the foam of the eternal sea. I am quivery with joy as I traverse that golden landscape until tendrils of darkness start to eat away at my imagination. I devolve quickly, pulled from my freedom and left, once more, a professional behind a cubicle wall answering the ringing phone.

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written by Kelly, July 08, 2005
Well, here I go again. I probably sound like an idiot bouncing from blog to blog, but I'm enjoying everyone's stories so much I have to let it be known!

So, I really enjoyed your story. It's great reading a fictional story you created to contrast all the logical, theological posts. "tendrils of darkness start to eat away at my imagination" Very astute, and just how I feel around, oh, 2:30 of every workday. :laugh: Hmm, I guess it's probably not a fictional story, then is it?
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written by Rey, July 09, 2005
Thanks Kelly. I have to tell Lorna how much I enjoyed doing this. I haven't written "fiction" in quite a while and it felt good stretching those muscles again. I think I hear the waters of those golden shores lapping at my heals once more...
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written by Laurie, July 09, 2005
That was great! I, too, am a cubicle dweller. Very well put.
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